bythewaves: (regard)
Maglor Makalaure Canafinwe Feanorion ([personal profile] bythewaves) wrote in [community profile] gwador 2014-11-01 07:50 am (UTC)

[ Psh no, he's not telling, it might puff that ego too much! ]

Much better. [ He nods ]

Now... this other part here, see how the song is both a lament but also one of hope? Try and see if you can put some of that emotion into the song - imagine if you were the singer in truth, and not just in play.

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